Too noisy to talk
Takes his place in the stag line
Hoping for a dance
©2015 Annette Rochelle Aben
Woe be to the buck, Who challenges this here doe, At her own crossing?
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She’s really a dear… Though she hides in the rushes… She eyes the clearing…
Ah, so the game continues as you pelt me with your puns and for me to rack my brain for 10 point returns while I lick the salt of my wounds.
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Need some lime and tequila?
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I am honored to know that I zeroed in on that connection. As always, a pleasure and loads of fun.
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I love this! Hope he got lucky 🙂
Hello Annette! This haiku reminds me of my club days. Good one. 😉
Thanks! I kept flashing back to middle school dances myself!
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Woe be to the buck,
Who challenges this here doe,
At her own crossing?
LikeLiked by 3 people
She’s really a dear… Though she hides in the rushes… She eyes the clearing…
LikeLiked by 3 people
Ah, so the game continues as you pelt me with your puns and for me to rack my brain for 10 point returns while I lick the salt of my wounds.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Need some lime and tequila?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Pingback: RonovanWrites #Haiku #Poetry Challenge #Review 63 | ronovanwrites
I am honored to know that I zeroed in on that connection. As always, a pleasure and loads of fun.
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I love this! Hope he got lucky 🙂
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Hello Annette! This haiku reminds me of my club days. Good one. 😉
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Thanks! I kept flashing back to middle school dances myself!
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