Ouch! I’ve seen girls lay out in the sun wearing gold bangles and necklaces. That’s what immediately came to mind when I read your haiku. I had never given it much thought, since I don’t wear jewelry out in the sun, but that metal has got to get scorching hot after a while. Brilliant haiku!
Brilliant take! Hot property indeed!
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Thank you, kind sir! Thank you! 🙂
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Hot Haiku Annette, catch it while it lasts!!!
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Sizzle! Sizzle! 🙂
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Mam, a brilliant haiku !
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Thank you so much! ❤
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Welcome ☺️
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A little late but here is my contribution. ~~dru~~
https://saywhatumean2say.com/2016/08/10/ronovans-haiku-challenge-108-sizzlesleek/
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vroom vroom! cool cars, eh?
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Ouch! I’ve seen girls lay out in the sun wearing gold bangles and necklaces. That’s what immediately came to mind when I read your haiku. I had never given it much thought, since I don’t wear jewelry out in the sun, but that metal has got to get scorching hot after a while. Brilliant haiku!
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lol – I imagine they are Zebras in training, eh? ❤
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Ha, ha! You have such an imagination . . .
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Thanks for your recent visit to my blog.
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Turn about is fair play, so I am delighted! Welcome to mine!!
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