Still yourself and hear
Geese are passing overhead
Winging their way home
Pulling the night sky behind
Shadows in twilight
©2016 Annette Rochelle Aben
Nicely done Annette.
xxx Huge Hugs xxx
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Thank you, David! I love my geese! 🙂
A fantastic poem Annette I can picture this scene vividly.
Oh, I am so glad! I shall thank the geese, the next time they cruise by! 🙂
Made me tear up with its beauty.
High praise, indeed! ❤
I find myself using superlatives when it comes to your poetry, and I am not a superlatives kind of ‘gal. Perhaps the appeal to me is “short, sweet, and to the point” as my grandmother used to recommend.
A gentleman friend of mine, picked up one of my books one day and as he was reading through it, he looked at me and said, “This is haiku? I like it, these are short!” So I totally respect, accept and revel in YOUR compliment. Writing haiku has taught me to hone my thoughts into a much more focused presentation! 🙂
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