lofty lullaby

3DAHaikuPerspective

Still yourself and hear

Geese are passing overhead

Proclaiming bedtime

Winging their way home

Pulling the night sky behind

Shadows in twilight

©2016 Annette Rochelle Aben

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8 responses to “lofty lullaby

  1. Nicely done Annette.
    xxx Huge Hugs xxx

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  2. A fantastic poem Annette I can picture this scene vividly.

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  3. Made me tear up with its beauty.

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  4. I find myself using superlatives when it comes to your poetry, and I am not a superlatives kind of ‘gal. Perhaps the appeal to me is “short, sweet, and to the point” as my grandmother used to recommend.

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    • A gentleman friend of mine, picked up one of my books one day and as he was reading through it, he looked at me and said, “This is haiku? I like it, these are short!” So I totally respect, accept and revel in YOUR compliment. Writing haiku has taught me to hone my thoughts into a much more focused presentation! 🙂

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