The alarm goes off
And the hand reaches blindly
Mission accomplished
The enemy now silenced
Temporary solution
©2017 Annette Rochelle Aben
https://colleenchesebro.com/2017/12/12/colleens-weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-62-bells-past/
The alarm goes off
And the hand reaches blindly
Mission accomplished
The enemy now silenced
Temporary solution
©2017 Annette Rochelle Aben
https://colleenchesebro.com/2017/12/12/colleens-weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-62-bells-past/
He He!
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Thank goodness this is NOT my daily reality
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It is mine…! I gotta train myself to not press snooze…, but the dark mornings are soooo hard to wake up in!
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Ah yes. A temporary solution indeed. Well-done, Annette.
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drat the luck!
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It’s too real for me! 🙂
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LOL! I just read Ritu’s senryu! I love how everyone is finding synonyms that work for them. Our poems are so much more expressive this way. ❤
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It is a challenge but fun so far. 🙂
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What I like is that everyone’s poetry isn’t the same anymore. The synonyms cause a shift in meaning. 😀
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Temporary with a curse following when doing it too often… lol!
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I used to set the alarm for two hours before I wanted to really get up, but that didn’t work either So, I simply reply on Spirit to waken me and haven’t used an alarm in nearly 3 decades
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I mostly wake up on time or way before too. But I don’t dare to turn it off… at times I would have been too late for work… lol!
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Very good response, Annette.
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Thank you, Robbie… it was the best that seemed to come to mind! 🙂
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