She gave it a whack
It just couldn’t be that hard
And it just might work
Casually sauntered by
And dropped the glove at his feet
©2018 Annette Rochelle Aben
She gave it a whack
It just couldn’t be that hard
And it just might work
Casually sauntered by
And dropped the glove at his feet
©2018 Annette Rochelle Aben
She sounds like my kind of girl.
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Oh, that is splendid! What a great story with your Tanka, Sis. I love it! ❤
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Thank you, Colleen! It was fun. 🙂
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I loved it, Sis! A perfect Tanka. 😀
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I can just picture the scene. Fun poem and great take on the challenge, Annette. 🙂
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Many thanks Diana! 🙂
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Thank you, thank you! 🙂
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Great story Annette.. beautifully told… hugsx
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Thank you Sally. I was none so discreet nor lady-like. I’d simply toss myself in their general direction and hope they’d be receptive! 😉
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Excellent.. hugs xx
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It’s a vivid scene, “looks” fun! I love it, Annette!
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That’ll show him. Girl power! Ha, ha! Good one, my friend! ❤ xx
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We must do, what we must do! ❤
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I hear you! 😉
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