Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge Ghost & Hollow

Posted on October 16, 2018 | 11 Comments

Merely a vision

A floating, empty spirit

Died with life’s anger

Doomed as shadow land vapor

Exists to scare you witless

©2018 Annette Rochelle Aben

https://colleenchesebro.com/2018/10/16/colleens-weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-no-106-ghost-hollow-synonymsonly/

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11 responses to “Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge Ghost & Hollow”

  1. Colleen Chesebro | October 16, 2018 at 3:59 pm | Reply

    Shadow vapor! Love it, Sis. ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  2. robbiesinspiration | October 18, 2018 at 12:14 am | Reply

    A lovely, creepy poem, Annette.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Pingback: Colleen’s #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Recap No. 106, “Ghost & Hollow”, #SynonymsOnly | Colleen Chesebro ~ The Faery Whisperer

  4. Vashti Q | October 26, 2018 at 10:10 am | Reply

    Ooh! 😮 This is a spooky Tanka, my friend. The lines, ‘Died with life’s anger
    Doomed as shadow land vapor’ gave me chills! Very well done!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. macjam47 | October 29, 2018 at 10:36 am | Reply

    Wow, Annette, this is one spppoooky poem! Great job! Hugs

    Liked by 1 person

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