Merely a vision
A floating, empty spirit
Died with life’s anger
Doomed as shadow land vapor
Exists to scare you witless
©2018 Annette Rochelle Aben
Merely a vision
A floating, empty spirit
Died with life’s anger
Doomed as shadow land vapor
Exists to scare you witless
©2018 Annette Rochelle Aben
Shadow vapor! Love it, Sis. ❤
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Thank you, for the opportunity! ❤
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Always a pleasure to showcase such great talent.
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A lovely, creepy poem, Annette.
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Thank you, oh, Mistress of Horror! ❤
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Ooh! 😮 This is a spooky Tanka, my friend. The lines, ‘Died with life’s anger
Doomed as shadow land vapor’ gave me chills! Very well done!
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Thank you! ❤ That is high praise, indeed. As I am usually not known for spooky stuff, your comment makes me smile! ❤
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You can do anything, my friend. ❤ xo
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Wow, Annette, this is one spppoooky poem! Great job! Hugs
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Thank you, thank you so much.
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