Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge Poet’s Choice Ice & Sparkle

 

Faces glazed over

When she came into the room

With her diamond smile

She, a radiant beauty

Women elbowed their husbands

©2018 Annette Rochelle Aben

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17 responses to “Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge Poet’s Choice Ice & Sparkle

  1. Colleen Chesebro

    Wow! That last line is a humdinger! The perfect Tanka twist! ❤ Love it, Sis! ❤

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  2. Great word choices, Annette, and a super poem.

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  3. Yay! Good one, Annette!

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  4. Brilliant Annette…and it has been some time since I have had that effect walking into the room….glazed over perhaps!! hugs xxx

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  6. Ha Ha! That had me smiling. 🙂

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  7. Ha, ha. I love the last line. You really know how to do the surprise ending. Good one! 😀 xo

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