Faces glazed over
When she came into the room
With her diamond smile
She, a radiant beauty
Women elbowed their husbands
©2018 Annette Rochelle Aben
Faces glazed over
When she came into the room
With her diamond smile
She, a radiant beauty
Women elbowed their husbands
©2018 Annette Rochelle Aben
Wow! That last line is a humdinger! The perfect Tanka twist! ❤ Love it, Sis! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are welcome. Tanka you for the opportunity! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Always dear, Sister. ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great word choices, Annette, and a super poem.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Robbie! 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yay! Good one, Annette!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Erika! 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are very welcome, Annette 💖
LikeLiked by 1 person
Brilliant Annette…and it has been some time since I have had that effect walking into the room….glazed over perhaps!! hugs xxx
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well, we have a lot to catch up on, Let us away to glaze some eyes, eh?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Pingback: Colleen’s #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Recap No. 113th, 1st of Month: Poets Choice of Words – Colleen Chesebro ~ The Faery Whisperer
Ha Ha! That had me smiling. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
That makes ME smile! Thank you
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome Annette. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ha, ha. I love the last line. You really know how to do the surprise ending. Good one! 😀 xo
LikeLike
Thank you, my dear! 🙂
LikeLike
Pingback: Colleen’s #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Recap No. 113th, 1st of Month: Poets Choice of Words | Word Craft ~ Prose & Poetry