dis place

Posted on August 29, 2019 | 14 Comments

Joan

Her life

In a room

Once had a house

Filled with memories

She could always enjoy

Now, in her ten by twelve space

She closes her eyes to enjoy

Those precious memories of her house

That will not fit in her life in a room

©2019 Annette Rochelle Aben

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14 responses to “dis place”

  1. kevin cooper | August 29, 2019 at 4:40 pm | Reply

    Very nice! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Zoolon | August 29, 2019 at 4:41 pm | Reply

    One of your best. Great story ~ George

    Liked by 1 person

  3. davidbruceblog | August 29, 2019 at 5:00 pm | Reply

    Reblogged this on davidbruceblog #2 and commented:
    Memorable.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. robbiesinspiration | August 30, 2019 at 2:31 am | Reply

    This is very poignant, Annette

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Erika Kind | August 30, 2019 at 11:17 am | Reply

    That leaves a heavy heart. But very compassionately written, Annette.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Denis1950 | September 1, 2019 at 1:06 am | Reply

    You are touching the emotional side of me Annette, beautiful insightful poem.

    Liked by 1 person

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