faint hints

She dropped to the ground

Hence, the opportunity

For him to notice

©2019 Annette Rochelle Aben

https://colleenchesebro.com/2019/09/24/re-post-colleens-2019-weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-no-146-synonymsonly/

7 responses to “faint hints

  1. LOL! A brilliant Senryu, Sis. I love it. Are you home yet? I think of you daily. ❤

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  2. Ha, ha! If that doesn’t get her noticed, nothing will. 😉 xo

    Liked by 1 person

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