Entrancing #writephoto

Sue Vincent gave us a lovely photo to prompt us into writing this week. I chose to craft a 99-word story. Perhaps, you would like to write a poem, or fashion a longer tale. If so, please visit Sue’s blog and see what this photo says to you for this week’s #writephoto prompt, Entrance.


Patty was entranced by the tales of the cave in the picture. Each time she visited her Grandmother, hours would pass as she listened to the old woman talk of the strange goings-on that only the intensely curious had ever really experienced. All this made Patty wish she had been her Grandmother’s childhood friend.

One day, while visiting, she fell asleep in the comfy chair. She began dreaming of the picture’s rocks, moss and mysterious darkness that called to her. When she opened her eyes, Patty was standing at the cave entrance. Delighted, she took a tentative step forward.

©2020 Annette Rochelle Aben


20 responses to “Entrancing #writephoto

  1. You reach all the best places through dreams 😉 Lovely story, Annette.

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  2. I love the mental images here! Makes me wonder now what is really in that cave…

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  3. Now THAT is a cliffhanger, Annette 🤗❤️🤗

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  4. A lovely piece of flash fiction, Annette.

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  6. Yes and what happened next, is a take for another day 💜

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  8. aah you left us at a cliffhanger, dreams can lead us to many adventures!

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