Colleen presents us with the opportunity to choose our own words and format for this week’s writing challenge. I chose Spirit and Free.
I’ve watched another
Gasping for their final breath
As they left this world
I have watched as their Spirit
Was freed from a life of pain
©2020 Annette Rochelle Aben
That’s powerful!
LikeLiked by 2 people
I love this! Thank you 💓💓
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very poignant, Annette.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very sad, Annette. Beautifully written.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Rough times…you’ve captured it well. ♥
LikeLiked by 1 person
A rough thing to watch. Well stated.
Pat
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hi, Annette. This is a moving and heartbreaking poem. I hope all is well. Stay safe. ❤ xo
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sis, I felt the emotion in your words. May the angels protect you. Hugs and love. ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person