No More Tears

Colleen presents us with the opportunity to choose our own words and format for this week’s writing challenge. I chose Spirit and Free.

I’ve watched another

Gasping for their final breath

As they left this world

I have watched as their Spirit

Was freed from a life of pain

©2020 Annette Rochelle Aben

https://colleenchesebro.com/2020/04/07/colleens-2020-weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-no-172-poetschoice/

8 responses to “No More Tears

  1. Margot Kinberg

    That’s powerful!

    Liked by 2 people

  2. I love this! Thank you 💓💓

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Very poignant, Annette.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Very sad, Annette. Beautifully written.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Gwen M. Plano

    Rough times…you’ve captured it well. ♥

    Liked by 1 person

  6. A rough thing to watch. Well stated.

    Pat

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Hi, Annette. This is a moving and heartbreaking poem. I hope all is well. Stay safe. ❤ xo

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Sis, I felt the emotion in your words. May the angels protect you. Hugs and love. ❤

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