Sad, she knew she’d fall
But her feelings weren’t returned
Ice cream is so cold
©2020 Annette Rochelle Aben
https://ronovanwrites.com/2020/11/02/weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-cold-fall/
Sad, she knew she’d fall
But her feelings weren’t returned
Ice cream is so cold
©2020 Annette Rochelle Aben
https://ronovanwrites.com/2020/11/02/weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-cold-fall/
Very nice last line about how cold ice cream is for one needing comfort.
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I love that twist at the end! Very clever!
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Cold can be intriguing… when it is ice cream…
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he caused her to fall
skinning her knee and her pride
dropping her cold treat
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This made me laugh 😊
Pat
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then my work is done here! ❤
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😊😊
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Exciting and great depiction. Loved it. The last line is a killer.
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Thank you! 🙂
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So true!
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I never got the pain pleasure of ice cream … unless it was rum and raison! 🤣
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