Mistreat

Posted on November 2, 2020 | 17 Comments

Sad, she knew she’d fall

But her feelings weren’t returned

Ice cream is so cold

©2020 Annette Rochelle Aben

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17 responses to “Mistreat”

  1. Frank Hubeny | November 2, 2020 at 9:29 am | Reply

    Very nice last line about how cold ice cream is for one needing comfort.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Margot Kinberg | November 2, 2020 at 9:30 am | Reply

    I love that twist at the end! Very clever!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Erika | November 2, 2020 at 2:58 pm | Reply

    Cold can be intriguing… when it is ice cream…

    Liked by 2 people

  4. Ronovan | November 5, 2020 at 1:13 am | Reply

    he caused her to fall
    skinning her knee and her pride
    dropping her cold treat

    Liked by 2 people

  5. jazzytower | November 6, 2020 at 10:04 pm | Reply

    This made me laugh 😊

    Pat

    Liked by 1 person

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  7. The Zesty Geist | November 9, 2020 at 1:26 am | Reply

    Exciting and great depiction. Loved it. The last line is a killer.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. TheHiddenEdge | November 9, 2020 at 11:38 am | Reply

    I never got the pain pleasure of ice cream … unless it was rum and raison! 🤣

    Liked by 1 person

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