It
Could be
That you are
Quite a good friend
People speak highly
Of you in glowing terms
They enjoy time spent time with you
You could be laughing or crying
And they will want to do it again
Nice to know this before your eulogy
©2021 Annette Rochelle Aben
Your DAILY MESSAGE from Angels
FREE YOURSELF OF EXCESS!
We love you
In the process right now, Angels!!!
Whoa
We heard
It coming
How far away
Can we find our cash
How long had it been since
We bought ice cream from a truck
Once out there, we were not alone
The neighbor and her two kids were there
And everyone got something on a stick
©2021 Annette Rochelle Aben
Your DAILY MESSAGE from Angels
WRITE A LETTER to a DECEASED LOVED ONE!
We love you
Great idea, Angels!!!
I’m Annette Rochelle Aben and writing has been my go-to for creative expression, emotional release, and a way to boost my GPA since I was a child. I am thrilled to be a part of Poetry Treasures.
When I first started writing poetry, I never knew much about it, except to know that (to me) a good poem HAD to rhyme. Gee whiz, have I ever been schooled through connecting with other writers and poets here in the blogsphere. One of my favorite poetry styles is called SYLLABIC POETRY. And one of my favorite forms of said style is the ABHANGA. An ABHANGA is a 4-line poem in which the first 3 lines contain 6 syllables each and the last line has 4 syllables. Also, the 2nd and 3rd lines must rhyme with each other.
Here is a poem I wrote titled: SUPER SISTER and it is inspired by a very timely event occurring in my sister’s life. As the older sister, I want to vanquish the bad guys and make her problem disappear, but ah… please read on.
I wanted to step in
to prove I have her back
it’s not courage I lack
it’s not my fight
right now, she needs support
reminders of her strength
me to stay back some length
for she’s got this
For this poem, I wrote a DOUBLE ABHANGA, as I felt that the thought needed to be expanded. Sometimes we can love someone so much that we forget that love doesn’t mean smothering another’s flame. Unless she asks me to help her, to do so would be disrespectful.
Thank you for sharing this SYLLABIC POETRY moment with me and I look forward to learning that you have obtained a copy (or two) of Poetry Treasures.
Keep in touch, eh? https://annetterochelleaben.wordpress.com
Annette Rochelle Aben 