Day 6 of the Wordcrafter Poetry Treasures Blog Tour Annette Rochelle Aben

 I’m Annette Rochelle Aben and writing has been my go-to for creative expression, emotional release, and a way to boost my GPA since I was a child. I am thrilled to be a part of Poetry Treasures.

 When I first started writing poetry, I never knew much about it, except to know that (to me) a good poem HAD to rhyme. Gee whiz, have I ever been schooled through connecting with other writers and poets here in the blogsphere. One of my favorite poetry styles is called SYLLABIC POETRY. And one of my favorite forms of said style is the ABHANGA. An ABHANGA is a 4-line poem in which the first 3 lines contain 6 syllables each and the last line has 4 syllables. Also, the 2nd and 3rd lines must rhyme with each other.

 Here is a poem I wrote titled: SUPER SISTER and it is inspired by a very timely event occurring in my sister’s life. As the older sister, I want to vanquish the bad guys and make her problem disappear, but ah…  please read on.

I wanted to step in

to prove I have her back

it’s not courage I lack

it’s not my fight

right now, she needs support

reminders of her strength

me to stay back some length

for she’s got this

For this poem, I wrote a DOUBLE ABHANGA, as I felt that the thought needed to be expanded. Sometimes we can love someone so much that we forget that love doesn’t mean smothering another’s flame. Unless she asks me to help her, to do so would be disrespectful.

 Thank you for sharing this SYLLABIC POETRY moment with me and I look forward to learning that you have obtained a copy (or two) of Poetry Treasures.

 Keep in touch, eh? https://annetterochelleaben.wordpress.com

8 responses to “Day 6 of the Wordcrafter Poetry Treasures Blog Tour Annette Rochelle Aben

  1. Thank you for sharing, Annette! What a wonderful poem, even the meter is like higher math to me. 😉 I think with help of your book i will be able going closer to the meter, and the mysterious beauty. Have a beautiful weekend! Michael

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  2. I agree with you 200%!!

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  3. A lovely contribution to the tour, Annette.

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  4. Oh how wonderful, Annette!! I love this!

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