Charli Mills gave us rainbows and cats and the outdoors as parts of this week’s 99-word Flash Fiction challenge.
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Joni drew her knees up under her chin and closed her eyes. If only she had a friend with whom she could share moments like this. There was a gentle rain falling, but she was protected by the thick foliage of her favorite tree.
Outside was where Joni went to think and dream. Lately, she’d been dreaming of a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. So, she always tried to be under the tree during gentle rains.
She opened her eyes to see the sun shining, and walking out of the rainbow was a golden-haired cat.
©2021 Annette Rochelle Aben
I love the visual imagery here! And that tree is such a great setting. Love this.
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Oh, Margot, thank you so much.I can see things I would change and things I would keep the same. 🙂
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Very nice, little one!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Michael, thank you for sharing on your remarkable site! 🙂
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Oh, thank you for the kindness, Annette! You are welcome. Its always a pleasure! xx Michael
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What our heart desires, arrives in unexpected gifts. Beautiful, Annette.
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Thank you, Charli! ❤
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Keep the cat! Lovely story.
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Yes! Keep the cat… Thank you, Chel.
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What a glorious vision.
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Thank you so much.
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