In the distance, they saw
Tables laden with food
Not wanting to be rude
They headed out
One by one, forward march
Conveyances they lack
They’ll carry on their backs
All they will take
Determined oh they were
They kept the goal in sight
Focused with all their might
On the picnic
©2021 Annette Rochelle Aben
https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2021/07/27/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-236-themeprompt/
Reminded me of the ANTZ movie 🐜🐜🐜🐜🐜
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🙂 Cool, we’ll have to put some popcorn on the stove!
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👍
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lovely. Which form is this?
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Thank you, Ruth! This is a triple abhanga
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ooh. I’ll look that up!! thx
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That reminds me of the Pink Panther cartoon 😄
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LOL
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Expeditions need lots of food! Good take on the theme!
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Thank you so much, Elizabeth.
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What a fabulous Abhanga series. I love that the expedition was a picnic! 😀 ❤
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Thank you! ❤
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And… I just saw the title! OMG! This is so good! ❤
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Thank you, Sis! I love having fun with words!! 😉
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It was brilliant! Soooo good! ❤
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Wow, this is amazing, Annette. 😊
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Thank you, Gwen! 🙂
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Beautiful poetry.
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Thank you, sir! 🙂
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Such a pleasure.
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