Haiku 1/11/22

Sunlit silver clouds

Tree shadows against white fence

Brown leaf ground cover

©2022 Annette Rochelle Aben


19 responses to “Haiku 1/11/22

  1. Annette, I really like how you work your way down from the sky to the ground – I can see the scene! Lovely.

    -David [ben Alexander]

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  2. As above, so below… you captured the scene perfectly, Annette. Excellent haiku. ❤

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  4. I like this haiku. xo

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  5. Ooh, love the twist with that last line. Wonderful, Annette 💕🙂

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  6. So pretty! I felt like I could see it in front of me. Well done, Annette! 🙂

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  7. Yes, the descent from sky to ground, from sunlit silver to shadowed brown. Very visual.

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  8. Beautiful imagery

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