Sunlit silver clouds
Tree shadows against white fence
Brown leaf ground cover
©2022 Annette Rochelle Aben
https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2022/01/11/tankatuesday-poetry-challenge-no-256-colleens-specific-form-haiku/
Annette, I really like how you work your way down from the sky to the ground – I can see the scene! Lovely.
-David [ben Alexander]
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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As above, so below… you captured the scene perfectly, Annette. Excellent haiku. ❤
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Thank you, Sis! ❤
You’re welcome, Sis. ❤
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I like this haiku. xo
🙂 xo
Ooh, love the twist with that last line. Wonderful, Annette 💕🙂
Thank you very much! 🙂
So pretty! I felt like I could see it in front of me. Well done, Annette! 🙂
Awesome! Thank you. 🙂
Yes, the descent from sky to ground, from sunlit silver to shadowed brown. Very visual.
Thank you so much!
Beautiful imagery
Thank you very much!
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Wonderful haiku.
Thank you, so much!
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Annette, I really like how you work your way down from the sky to the ground – I can see the scene! Lovely.
-David [ben Alexander]
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you so much! 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
As above, so below… you captured the scene perfectly, Annette. Excellent haiku. ❤
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you, Sis! ❤
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You’re welcome, Sis. ❤
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I like this haiku. xo
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🙂 xo
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Ooh, love the twist with that last line. Wonderful, Annette 💕🙂
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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So pretty! I felt like I could see it in front of me. Well done, Annette! 🙂
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Awesome! Thank you. 🙂
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Yes, the descent from sky to ground, from sunlit silver to shadowed brown. Very visual.
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful imagery
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Thank you very much!
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Wonderful haiku.
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Thank you, so much!
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