Haiku 1/11/22

Posted on January 11, 2022 | 19 Comments

Sunlit silver clouds

Tree shadows against white fence

Brown leaf ground cover

©2022 Annette Rochelle Aben

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19 responses to “Haiku 1/11/22”

  1. ben Alexander | January 11, 2022 at 1:15 pm | Reply

    Annette, I really like how you work your way down from the sky to the ground – I can see the scene! Lovely.

    -David [ben Alexander]

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  2. Colleen M. Chesebro | January 11, 2022 at 2:53 pm | Reply

    As above, so below… you captured the scene perfectly, Annette. Excellent haiku. ❤

    Liked by 2 people

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  4. SelmaMartin | January 12, 2022 at 6:14 am | Reply

    I like this haiku. xo

    Liked by 2 people

  5. harmonykentonline | January 12, 2022 at 6:33 am | Reply

    Ooh, love the twist with that last line. Wonderful, Annette 💕🙂

    Liked by 2 people

  6. yvettemcalleiro | January 13, 2022 at 9:42 pm | Reply

    So pretty! I felt like I could see it in front of me. Well done, Annette! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  7. D. Avery @shiftnshake | January 14, 2022 at 12:40 am | Reply

    Yes, the descent from sky to ground, from sunlit silver to shadowed brown. Very visual.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. indishe | January 16, 2022 at 7:22 am | Reply

    Beautiful imagery

    Liked by 1 person

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