Please Please Me

Plump pumpkin pancakes prepared properly

Pumpkin requires special spices for taste

Pancakes are gobbled up, no waste

Prepared for enjoyment by caring hands, tenderly

Properly topped with whipped cream, brown sugar-laced

©2022 Annette Rochelle Aben

I follow a blog filled with a wide variety of great poetry. One of the recent posts was of a style called: Emmett. There are 5 LINES. The first line is 5 WORDS in length. The subsequent lines begin with each of the other words of the first line so that when the first words of each line are read together, they recreate the first sentence!  (see my poem above), And there is a rhyme scheme of abbab. FOLLOW David’s BLOG (link below) to enjoy reading and perhaps crafting some challenging poetry  Skeptics Kaddish

12 responses to “Please Please Me

  1. shame!……no CDN maple syrup?

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  2. Now I’m hungry! Lols 😂

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  4. This is a great poem, Annette.

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  5. This is a delicious Emmett 😀

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