faint hints

Posted on September 28, 2019 | 7 Comments

She dropped to the ground

Hence, the opportunity

For him to notice

©2019 Annette Rochelle Aben

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7 responses to “faint hints”

  1. Colleen M. Chesebro | September 28, 2019 at 2:50 pm | Reply

    LOL! A brilliant Senryu, Sis. I love it. Are you home yet? I think of you daily. ❤

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  4. Vashti Q | October 3, 2019 at 5:11 pm | Reply

    Ha, ha! If that doesn’t get her noticed, nothing will. 😉 xo

    Liked by 1 person

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