Jeanette had died

Staring into space

She appeared to be elsewhere

And in fact, she was

©2021 Annette Rochelle Aben

21 responses to “Jeanette had died

  1. Margot Kinberg

    What a great description of what death is!

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  2. Thank you, Annette! Always a sad feeling beeing confronted with eschatological moments. Michael

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  3. Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
    Jeanette had died …. by Annette Rochelle Aben

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  4. Excellent senryu, Sis. You got this concept totally! ❤

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  5. I’ve had many of those moment myself🙂. Like a mini vaca🙂


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  6. Wow. This gave me goosebumps. Beautiful. ❤ xo

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  8. Hi, Annette. I have been notified that you are following my blog, and would like to say thank you for doing that.
    Best wishes, Pete.

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